In class we have been doing some buddy writing. We drew eight
boxes and planned our writing in them. We separated the story into 4 paragraphs and
transferred our ideas into them. Here is our story about The Potato Head's Journey
Potato Head’s Journey
Once there were two fat juicy delicious potatoes. Miss
Potato Head and Mr Potato Head. The potatoes lived on a muddy potato farm by
the power station in Ireland.
One by one the potatoes were picked, washed and bagged. Miss and Mr Potato Head
were in the last bag and they were shipped to Germany.
While they were on their trip Miss and Mr Potato Head
became best friends. It was a long and bumpy trip. Eventually Mr Potato Head
fell out of the big bag and he rolled and rolled around the huge ship. He felt
quite queasy. “Throw down the anchor” the sailor said fiercely. The next thing
they knew they were all split up but these two were taken to the F.B.I for an assessment.
Once the president realised they could talk they
became top edition spies.
They were sent on
different missions and ended up spying on each other. Little did they
know they were betrayed and put in a restaurant called Labola and a ginormous
hand grabbed them by the stomach and a potato peeler. They were peeled and put
in a with boiling water. Luckily they escaped. The chef Ramsey’s hand slipped
and they feel down the garbage disposal.
They fell for each other and ended up getting married
in a resort in Hawaii.
They ended up being re accepted into the F.B.I and got sent on a special
mission to the Hungry Games.
They went through a circular tube and ended up in the
food bowl of Cat and Pete. They tried to run away then another gigantic hand
grabbed them. It was Cat. She started laughing and said “this is winning
quality”. Mr Potato was now in the stomach of Cat or Kittenville. A couple of
minutes later Mrs Potato was in the stomach of Pete of Kittenville. And that
was the end of Mr and Mrs Potato Head.
By Sophie and Rhiannon
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